Week 48: “The North Wind Brushes The Leaves”

November 27 – December 03 is the 48th week of the Gregorian calendar.  During this week, we have the Solar Term of Minor Snow (Nov 23 – Dec 06) and the micro-seasons of “The North Wind Brushes the Leaves” (Nov. 28 – Dec 01) and “The Tachibana First Turns Yellow” (Dec 02 – Dec 06).

The haiku selected for this week were written by Bahso, Issa, Reichhold, Kerouac, and Ross.


The 24 Solar Terms

The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China  (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around the city of Xi’an, which was the capital of the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)

This week we remain in the Solar Term of Minor Snow (Nov 23 – Dec 06).  Minor Snow is the 20th Solar Term of the year and indicates the arrival of snow in northern parts of China.

Some activities that are associated with this season include:

  • Eating Soup: In traditional Chinese medicine, you can prevent health issues by managing your “inner heat”. This philosophy advocates for consuming hot soups like cabbage and bean curd, spinach and bean curd, or mutton and radish soups as a possible way to balance internal heat, promote overall well-being, and address potential health concerns that come with more time inside.(2)
  • Preserving Pork: During this season, people begin to preserve pork.  If you preserve your pork now, it will be ready just in time for the Chinese Spring Festival.(2)
  • Pickling Vegetables: If you pickle your vegetables shortly after harvest, you can enjoy them all winter long.(2)

The 72 Seasons

The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai.  Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(5)

This week we have the microseasons of  “The North Wind Brushes the Leaves” (Nov. 28 – Dec 01) and “The Tachibana First Turns Yellow” (Dec 02 – Dec 06).

About the North Wind

A “North Wind” is a wind that originates in the north and blows in a southerly direction.  For those of us in the Northern Hemisphere, this means the air is coming from the Arctic and will bring colder temperatures.  For those in the Southern Hemisphere, a north wind can bring warmer temperatures.(4)

About The Tachibana

While it is possible for the term “Tachibana” to refer to any number of citrus fruits, it is likely that the Tachibana referenced here is the Tachibana orange or Citrus tachibana.  

The Tachibana orange is a variety of wild mandarin oranges native to Japan.  Tokyo-based writer Leow Florentyna, who writes for Atlas Obscura,  describes the Tachibana this way:

“Scratch the peel of one of those tiny fruits, and you’ll release a remarkably powerful fragrance, full of zesty, spicy, bitter notes, a dozen citruses distilled into a single whiff. Its flesh is an electric burst of tart and bitter flavors, far more intense than a lemon or grapefruit, followed by a barely detectable undertone of sweetness.”(5)

To read more about the Tachibana, check out last year’s post. “The Tachibana First Turns Yellow”.

Astronomical Season

December 03, the last day of week 48, is 71 days past the autumn equinox (Sept 23, 2023) and 18 days until the winter solstice (December 21, 2023). This means we are still in astronomical autumn, but we have entered the winter season for both the Solar Terms and 72-season calendars. 

The Beaver Moon

November’s full moon was on November 27.  This full moon is sometimes called The  Beaver Moon.  

Catherine Boeckmann at The Almanac explains the Beaver Moon by saying:

“This is the time of year when beavers begin to take shelter in their lodges, having laid up sufficient food stores for the long winter ahead. During the fur trade in North America, it was also the season to trap beavers for their thick, winter-ready pelts.”   Boekmann also tells us that “each full Moon name was applied to the entire lunar month in which it occurred and through all of the Moon’s phases—not only the full Moon.”  

Some other names for November’s moon include:

  • The Digging (or Scratching) Moon from the Tlingit
  • Deer Rutting Moon from the Dakota and Lakota 
  • Whitefish Moon from the Algonquin 

The next new moon is on December 12 and the next full moon is on December 26. 


Seasonal Haiku 

In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words as selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, “north wind” and “first snow” are relevant Winter-Heavens kigo.  “Basho’s Memorial Day” is also a relevant kigo.  

Basho died in 1684, in Osako, Japan. His death occurred on the 12th day of the 10th lunar month, or on November 28th in the Gregorian calendar. Dr. Gabi Greve tells us, “It is said that the first sleet of the season fell on this day” and the “winter drizzle” is kigo associated with November 28.(6)

In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku. ”snowing” and “new snow” as Winter-Celestials kigo.

Now with all this in mind, let’s read some haiku.


Basho

first snow-
the color of the knapsack
of a wandering priest.
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
autumn passing now ... 
through the slow drizzling of rain
the shape of the moon
(translated by Tim Chilcott

Issa 

hearing of first snow
a dreadful thing...
old man
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
the year's first snow
all trampled...
by the crows
(translated by David G. Lanoue)

Reichhold

first snow
deep as a fallen leaf
upright
porch light
brilliant with the points
of falling snow

Kerouac

Drizzle–
   Midnight pine,
I sit dry

Bruce Ross

November drizzle–
the squirrel’s head beneath
the wet leaves

Haiku invitation

This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu referencing “winter drizzle” or “first snow”.

Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your own page and link back to this post. I can’t wait to read what you write!  


To celebrate all the great haiku written for these prompts, I have started sharing one haiku from the week on my Instagram page. Please include your name as you would like it included in an Instagram post and your Instagram address (if you have one) so I can tag you.  If your haiku is selected for the week, I will let you know via the comments.   


Rebranding Update!

Hi Everyone,

Thanks for all the suggestions for a new domain name that will reflect the site’s focus on haiku and provide a space for sharing updates from my local haiku club.  

Right now, HardwiredHaiku.com (Thanks Angela at LetsWrite. . .) seems to be the front runner with HardwickHaiku.com (Thanks Sunra at SunraRainz for supporting this one) as a close second.

I will keep everyone posted as this unfolds.  As always, thanks for your continued support and engagement in this project!


Let’s Spread the Joy of Haiku!

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About the Haiku

Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess.  Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy.  Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from Dictionary of Haiku.  Jack Kerouac’s haiku were retrieved from Kerouac’s Book of Haiku.  Bruce Ross’s haiku was retrieved from Writing Haiku by Bruce Ross

References

  1. “24 Solar Terms”; ChinaHighlights.com
  2. “24 Solar Terms: 7 things you may not know about Minor Snow”; ChinaDaily.com
  3. “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
  4. North Wind”; Wikipedia
  5. Leow, Florentyna: “The Quest to Reacquaint Japan With Its Forgotten Native Citrus”: Altas Obscura
  6. Dr, Greve, Gabi, “Matsuo Basho”. Daruma Pilgrims in Japan
  7. Dr, Greve, Gabi, “shigure winter drizzle”. Matsuo Basho Archives

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      1. I think though that those who have more snow…know what to do with it. 🙂

        In some places that I have lived there is no preperation because of the infrequency. So when it does snow everything shuts down.

      1. Hooray! I love how haiku gives me the opportunity to live inside all my moments if I want to.

    1. Mark,
      This is wonderful. I like the fact the tree without leaves, I am presuming, is suddenly covered with snow on all the branches. A beautiful visual I have here. ~Nan

      1. Hi Nan, The tree in question is an old red maple tree that is in the parking lot of my work. I get to the office early, usually before other people arrive. It had just snowed the night before and as the storm clouds were passing. The morning sun broke through and hit the bare branches, now covered with snow.

      2. Gorgeous, Mark, and I love the explanation of the haiku. Sometimes it is those moments we never forget. I hope this is one of them (and by re-reading your ‘ku, you’ll return to it, I’d wager). ~Nan

  1. Mark, I really like your haiku. How the snow makes a familiar tree not as familiar. And I smiled at the “eating soup” part of the activities. I love soup at this time of year. Yesterday, I polished off turkey soup from Thanksgiving leftovers and I plan to make a veggie and bean soup today.

    1. Hi Dave, Thanks for the comment! The eating soup activity is interesting. Until you just said that, I hadn’t realized that I have also been eating soup for the past couple of weeks. Good luck with your next soup recipe!

    1. VJ,
      I like that you are watching the foreboding weather with tea and blanket. Isn’t that what we often do? Be smart enough to stay inside while pondering the weather? Or is it just me? ~Nan

      1. Well my doctor would certainly prefer that’s what I do – old bones don’t do well in falls, lol. Thanks for commenting. Nice to meet you.

      2. No, old bones do not. I found out the hard way when I broke my left wrist falling off my bicycle a few years ago. Stay safely inside and enjoy your tea! Nice to meet you, too, VJ.

  2. Although I am from Alabama and have lived years in Thailand and many other warm places, I have always loved snow. The haiku below is not exactly the first snow in Buffalo that year, but it was one of my more memorable ones as my wife and I enjoyed First Night in Buffalo some 20 years ago or so. I have also appreciated Mark’s prompts. It has led to some new haiku, but also rewriting some older ones. (Rewriting was sadly not part of my haiku process for a long time!) Here is my rewritten version of one from those Buffalo days:

    one New Year’s Eve
    snow falls in Buffalo–
    Pat’s cold kiss warms

    Peace,
    LaMon

    1. Hi LaMon, What a lovely haiku. I do enjoy hearing about the process of writing this and the memories it brings up. Thank you for sharing with us!

  3. Hi Mark: Thank-you for this wonderful post.

    a winter drizzles
    the golden leaves
    of a cherry blossom tree

    We have a cherry tree in our back yard.. watching its leaves turn golden in late autumn is an uplifting experience.

    I got inspired reading this morning’s post about the full moon. I didn’t know it was called “the Beaver Moon”…I thought of the beavers in their communities in rivers north of here, doing their final chores for the winter.

    full moon light
    the beaver slides a crimson leaf
    into the roof
    before bedding down

    1. Hi Maddy, these are both wonderful! I really enjoy your second poem inspired by the Beaver Moon! Beavers are very crafty and take their structures very seriously. I can almost imagine the beaver selecting the perfect leaf to put on top of the lodge. Almost like humans putting a star on top of a tree on Christmas Eve.

      1. Mark, thank-you for your great feedback. I love the comparison of the beaver to humans putting a star on top of the Christmas tree!
        🙂

      1. Thank-you LaMon for your positive feedback 🙂 Yes, we learn so much from these weekly posts!

    2. I love both of these haiku, Madeleine. I didn’t realize cherry trees leaves turn gold in the fall. Your Beaver Moon haiku, noticing that the beaver putting a crimson leaf onto the roof…wow, what a haiku moment! Outstanding.

      1. Thank-you Nan. I keep forgetting that they do, and so it seems to always be a new experience…I have been taking pictures. 🙂 I forgot too that then they turn a rosy peach which they began to do yesterday, afternoon!…This is one of the many things I love about Mark’s blog…one begins to watch with such a close eye, what’s going on outside.

      2. Yes, Madeleine, indeed it does. I think Mark’s column has helped my haiku writing because of all the information about the natural world and the kigo he suggests.

      3. Yes, I agree Nan, all this information Mark shares is inspiring and really helps our writing. 🙂

    3. Maddy,

      Up until some strong wind a few days ago my yellow willow leaves were still hanging on…

      I like the beaver verse too. I may have some in the creek. I’ve seen otter or mink play in the creek – so they must ‘bed’ down somewhere. 🙂

      Thanks for visiting my verse – I can’t thank you there as there was no reply available.

      1. Hi Jules…That’s lovely that you have minks and otters nearby. Yeah, the wind is doing the same to the cherry tree…sure, I understand. 🙂

      2. I haven’t seen a whole bunch of critters this year, but then I wasn’t looking. I’ve seen some snapping turtles and frogs though 🙂

        We had our first brief snow shower this morning … ❄

      3. Probably tucked away safe and sound enjoying a good winter slumber:) I bet it was lovely to catch sight of the minks and otters! And the snow shower this morning… a wonderful experience! 🙂

      4. Hi Jules: I was thinking about the snapping turtles and frogs you saw recently and wonder if they have already bedded down. Is it snowing regularly where you are? I heard a frog croak yesterday morning; it must have been a crow mimicking as they are all gone for the moment. I’ve seen blue jays recently and a couple of humming birds still hanging out in the back yard. The leaves on the cherry tree are slowly but surely leaving. Still looks pretty though. The tile with all the leaves too 🙂 Thank-you for the compliment on the beaver poem. (No problem about a reply not being available. It happens to me too.) Hope you are having a good day! 🥰

      5. For Maddy…
        In reference to Turtles and frogs…

        I haven’t seen any turltes and frogs. But I still see Mallards (ducks) and the other day I saw an Eastern Bluebird. We don’t get that much snow here. What little we have had has more or less melted by the end of the same or the next day 🙂

  4. winter drizzle
    the oranges barely
    becoming yellow

    Eavonka Ettinger
    @stormofcuteness

    The neighbor’s orange tree fascinates me year-round, but never moreso than when the fruit goes from green to yellow to orange as we get closer to Christmas.

    I am amazed to discover that my mother’s birth occurred on the same day as Basho’s death (centuries apart). I take this as a sign of the connectivity of creative energy as she has always had so much flowing through her. She just turned 78.

    1. Lovely haiku, Eavonka. It must be fun to watch the oranges change color. It’s interesting that your mother and Basho share a day; perhaps that’s why you are so successful in your haiku career. Happy Birthday to your mother. ~nan

      1. Yes, I feel that creative energy alive in me for sure. Mom has had a very rough year so I’m so happy she had a wonderful birthday this week. Thank you for your kind words, Nan.

    2. Eavonka: This is a very wonderful poem…it’s nice to think about the oranges changing color from green to yellow to orange. I get the impression that the fruit doesn’t stay yellow for very long. Your mother sounds like a very lovely person…it’s very interesting about the connection to Basho… she must have just had her birthday!

      1. Thank you, Maddy. It does feel like green and orange last longer than the yellow, it’s true.

        Yes, Mom’s birthday was this last Tuesday, and my sister made it really special for her. My sister lives a 5 hour drive (and 3 ferries away), but I am in a different country (they are in British Columbia, Canada) down here in Long Beach, CA.

      2. Hi Eavonka: I agree with Nan, I have a hunch where you get your creativity energy for your marvelous haiku! … Three ferries away! …I have never heard of that kind of travel, before! …Yeah, It’s hard when they are so far away:/

      3. My sister lives on an island an hour away from Vancouver Island. She has to take a ferry from her island to another small island to get the ferry to near Victoria. From there, she has to drive up to Comox (3 hours) to take the ferry (1 hour) to Powell River where Mom lives. Oh and you have to arrive early for all ferries as they have certain departure times.

        It is crazy to try to visit for me!

    3. Hi Eavonka,
      I always enjoy reading your haiku and getting a glimpse to what is happening in California! We definitely live in two different climates. Where I live, the only orange that is common during this time of year is the blaze orange that people wear when they head out into the woods during hunting season.
      Such an interesting connection between Basho and your mother. I am glad to hear that she had a nice birthday!

      1. I so enjoy these bicoastal exchanges, Mark. It opens up all the possibilities within kigo for haiku.

    4. Eavonka,

      How lovely to witness the ripening of fruit. When my in-laws retired to AZ they had an orange and grapefruit tree in their small back yard.

      Best to your Mother 78 is a good age. I hope she continues to enjoy life and create her unique love 💕

      1. Thank you so much, Jules. Yes, I hope my mom continues to improve and gets out & about more frequently. 💜

      2. Eavonka, I hope your mother continues to improve and able to get out more, too 🙂 She is in my prayers!

  5. Another fascinating column, Mark. I learn so much about the natural world, its seasons, and haiku from the masters each week. Glad to hear the rebranding is going well.
    Here’s a haiku (maybe two) based on the selected kigo.

    first snow…
    the cat’s paws shake off
    the flakes
    ~Nancy Brady, 2023

    first snow
    on the porch
    paw prints of a cat
    ~Nancy Brady, 2022

    https://www.nbsmithblog.wordpress.com

      1. Hi Eavonka:

        I followed the link “storm of cuteness” at the bottom of your haiku about the orange tree, yesterday afternoon and saw your wonderful poems posted on site. I noticed your lovely poem about children that juxtaposed the leaves, described as crimson. I didn’t see it until after I posted my poem about a crimson leaf:/ I wanted you to know.

      2. Michael Dylan Welch, I think, came up with the term “deja ku” to explain just how easy it is for different poets to have similar ideas. Thank you for letting me know, but it never even crossed my mind that my poem influenced yours.

        It has happened to me before where I didn’t realize it until much later. I did my best to rectify the situation. We are all only doing our best, after all. 💜

      3. I like that term, deja ku. Sometimes I write something and then wonder if I heard that in an audiobook or on a podcast. I often never figure it out!

      4. Hi Eavonka:

        I think I have found a solution.
        ….

        full moon light
        the beaver slides a tawny leaf
        onto the roof

        🙂

        I kind of like the word “tawny”:) Growing on me! … Hope you are having a nice Sunday evening, too!

      5. But Maddy you don’t need to change your haiku at all. As I said, deja ku happens all the time. Our poems have two words in common and nothing else.

        Just using “first snow” or “winter drizzle” is also 2 words, and yet we would never worry the poems were copies. Please don’t change your poem because you saw mine.

      6. Awwww! Eavonka, that means the world to me. That is such a lovely explanation, one of the sweetest things I have heard… I have to admit, I am tearing up! Have a wonderful evening! 🙂

    1. Hi Nan and Eavonka,
      I love these haiku and love the idea of a cat-ku collection! I think bottle rockets press did a book a while back of all cat haiku. It might not have been bottle rockets, I can’t really remember. Anyway, its a great idea.

      The first cat haiku reminds me of our cat who goes to the front door, and if it is too cold when we open the door, she just shakes her paws and turns around. She doesn’t even make it outside!

      1. Hi Mark,
        Thanks for the compliment and for recognizing those cat reactions to weather especially cold and snow. Ours is the same way. He looks up at me as if to say, “What did you do with this weather? You expect me to go out THERE. Change it back to warmth and sun. None of the wet stuff on my paws.” If Regulus goes outside and gets wet, he’ll shake himself like a dog when he comes in.

        Stan Forrester (of Bottlerockets fame) did a cat haiku anthology a few years ago. It was certainly worth the read. I was fortunate to have a few included. Still, I think there is always room for another.

      2. Thanks, but if you live with cats as long as I have and write haiku, eventually there are enough that some may resonate with the editors, and I was fortunate to have a couple chosen.

      1. Thanks for the compliment, and yes, there are. I had one cat and she would take one step, lift the paw, shake it off while stepping with the other. Repeating the process with the second paw, then back to the first, etc. She rarely went outside any way, but her snow aversion to it touching her paws never failed to amuse me.

    2. Hi Nan: Very darling haiku… I love the sweet surprise in the third line! of each poem. I agree with everyone…one can never read enough haiku about cats! They are made for haiku, or the other way around. It sounds familiar and I think I may have just read it somewhere 🙂 I am thinking on this post, perhaps.

      1. Thanks, Madeleine. That’s nice of you to say. Cats are made for haiku. They are so particular that they are fascinating to watch (thus those haiku moments just seem to happen easily enough). I’m sure dog owners experience these moments, too. Those of us who are owned by cats know that they rule.

    3. Nan – I couldn’t get to your site via the link. When I tried a warning came up that my connection wasn’t private…

      Anyway… I’ve seen deer prints… but I think the neighbors cats would rather be inside when its cold. 🙂

      1. Jules,
        I never posted it. I have involved (for more than a week) with preparing (finding volunteers), running, and then cleaning up after the local Friends of the Library’s book sale as well as dealing with the death of a close friend. Now, that I wrote all the thank you notes to the volunteers, I can get back to writing the blog, which is still a draft. I started looking at emails first though.

      2. Oh… maybe the draft was somehow what I was trying to connect to?

        Busy week. Hope things settle.

        May your friends memories be blessings as many as there are stars in the sky …

        (((Hugs)))

    1. Sometimes the quiet is too quiet.
      There is still bird song here, though I think ‘my’ birdies are getting up just a tad later in the mornings 🙂

  6. hidden hare revealed
    by its own dark watchful eyes
    and its snowbound tracks
    Does your local club know about the branding? My vote is for Hardwired, similar but distinct from the quiet reality of an in person group.

    1. Is this the famous D. Avery that has all the great books of poems and haiku? Thanks for your input on the rebranding! I am also leaning towards hardwired haiku. I think it makes the most sense. See you Thursday!

  7. I have throughly enjoyed reading this entire thread, beautiful pieces from everyone!
    deja ku… perfect description Eavonka, really enjoy your insights. Thank you Mark for putting this all together and creating community here.

    1. So glad you joined us here, Marjorie. Michael Dylan Welsh is the one who came up with “deja ku”, but it’s so powerful that I love to share it.

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